Bonjour, est-ce que quelqu'un peut me corriger cette orale d'anglais qui est super important (coefficient 4). Merci d'avance.
Hello, my name is Marie, Dupont is my family name, I am 15 years old I was born on the 29 th of October in 2004 in France . I live in Paris (in france). I am in the 9th grade . I have one brother and one sister. I like fish but I prefer chicken bacause it's delicious. My favorite color is Pink because in my opinion is a beautiful color. My best feind name is Lili. I don't have pets. I am brown haired and brown eyed.Conserning my personality and my preferences I am not very patient, I am not shy at all. I am too honest and a bit generous. My favorite subject in school is english because it's a very beautiful language (according to me). Although the subject I enjoy the least is sports. In my free time I love drawing, spending time with my family and my freinds and reading, because I find it very interesting and we always learn new somethings. However I hate playing video games... because I find it very boring. In terms of my abilities, I can speak english well, swim very well and ride a horse a little but I cannot ski, drive and surf at all. Finally, with regard to household chores I always clear the table, I often make my bed and I sometimes hoovers but I rarely do the laundry and never cut the grass.
Hello, my name is Marie, Dupont is my family name, I am 15 years old I was born on the 29 th of October in 2004 in France . I live in Paris (in france). I am in the 9th grade . I have one brother and one sister. I like fish but I prefer chicken bacause it's delicious. My favorite color is Pink because in my opinion is a beautiful color. My best feind name is Lili. I don't have pets. I am brown haired and brown eyed.Conserning my personality and my preferences I am not very patient, I am not shy at all. I am too honest and a bit generous. My favorite subject in school is english because it's a very beautiful language (according to me). Although the subject I enjoy the least is sports. In my free time I love drawing, spending time with my family and my freinds and reading, because I find it very interesting and we always learn new somethings. However I hate playing video games... because I find it very boring. In terms of my abilities, I can speak english well, swim very well and ride a horse a little but I cannot ski, drive and surf at all. Finally, with regard to household chores I always clear the table, I often make my bed and I sometimes hoovers but I rarely do the laundry and never cut the grass.
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Hello, my name is Marie, Dupont is my last name, I am 15 years old, I was born on October 29, 2004 in France. I live in Paris in France). I am in grade 9. I have a brother and a sister. I like fish but I prefer chicken because it is delicious. My favorite color is pink because I think it's a beautiful color. My best name is Lili. I do not have animals. I have brown hair and brown eyes. Regarding my personality and my preferences I am not very patient, I am not at all shy. I am too honest and a little generous. My favorite subject at school is English because it is a very beautiful language (in my opinion). Although the subject I like the least is sport. In my spare time, I like to draw, spend time with my family, my friends and read, because I find it very interesting and we are always learning new things. However I hate playing video games ... because I find it very boring. As for my abilities, I speak good English, I swim very well and I ride a little on horseback but I don't know how to ski, drive and surf at all. Finnaly, when it comes to household chores, I always clean the table, I often make my bed and sometimes I vacuum, but I rarely do the laundry and I never cut the grass.
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