Bonjour, J'aimerais juste que quelqu'un puisse corriger mes fautes car il y en a probablement et si possible me donner un avis sur ce que j'ai écris et qui aurait pu être amélioré car j'ai un peu l'impression d'être hors sujet.
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Enoncé : you are a spokesman for Wal-Mart
You make a press annoncement to explain the company's change in its waste disposal habits and you call on the retailer's consumers to help them carry out this immense task (100 words)
Mon travail : We have become aware that it is essential to preserve our nature because without it we are nothing. We are now setting ourselves new goals :
The first objective is give you access to in-store plastic bag and film recycling bins.
The second is offering low cost, high quality alternatives for single use plastic consumable products such as straws, cutlery and disposable tabletops.
The third is work with suppliers and our customers to prevent products and materials from becoming waste upstream and downstream in pursuit of a more circular economy.
Remember that we only have one planet...
je vous remercie par avance,
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Enoncé : you are a spokesman for Wal-Mart
You make a press annoncement to explain the company's change in its waste disposal habits and you call on the retailer's consumers to help them carry out this immense task (100 words)
Mon travail : We have become aware that it is essential to preserve our nature because without it we are nothing. We are now setting ourselves new goals :
The first objective is give you access to in-store plastic bag and film recycling bins.
The second is offering low cost, high quality alternatives for single use plastic consumable products such as straws, cutlery and disposable tabletops.
The third is work with suppliers and our customers to prevent products and materials from becoming waste upstream and downstream in pursuit of a more circular economy.
Remember that we only have one planet...
je vous remercie par avance,
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