Bonsoir,
Pourriez vous corriger mes erreurs s'il y en a (c'est fort probable) ?
L'objectif pour moi est de défendre la dimension environnementale de cet objet inutile qu'est le porte hamburger. (Il s'agit d'un travail de groupe certains fonction la fonction commerciale, le chef de l'entreprise, le directeur marketing...)
Contexte : J'interviens à un moment où le patron fait des remarques sur l'objet
And you haven't seen everything yet!
My team and I have worked hard to make our burger holder
(je veux dire porte-(ham)burger) as environmentally friendly as possible. Burger King is concerned about environmental issues. Therefore, they will be made from the waste found in our restaurants' garbage bins. A new waste bin will be installed in our various restaurants to be able to sort your waste between food and plastic. If our customers play the game and accept to sort their waste in exchange for a reduction, we will find less and less plastic in the sea. We have worked on the different components of this object so that they are reusable and washable in the washing machine or by hand. Obviously, if they were not, the interest of our object would be greatly reduced. This one is made of 80% recycled plastic and 20% wood. The wood will come from the various dumps of our partner cities. Moreover, our waiters will be able to put the burger directly on it. This will allow us to avoid putting plastic packaging around the burgers and will also save us money! In addition, with my colleague Brice, we have made sure that the paper leaflets to promote our object will be 100% made of recycled paper. The factories manufacturing these burger holders should work thanks to the heat provoked by our unsold food that we will burn.
Patron (pas ma partie) : Vous avez perdu la tête ! Ces mesures écologiques sont bien trop onéreuses ! Nous ne sommes pas une ONG !
Our customers are the generation of tomorrow, they are willing to pay more to preserve nature.
If we continue to throw our plastic packaging into nature and the sea, many animal species will disappear. The planet is getting warmer by the day and we must avoid this at all costs! Bosses have only one word in mind, the money !
Je vous remercie par avance,
Skabetix
Pourriez vous corriger mes erreurs s'il y en a (c'est fort probable) ?
L'objectif pour moi est de défendre la dimension environnementale de cet objet inutile qu'est le porte hamburger. (Il s'agit d'un travail de groupe certains fonction la fonction commerciale, le chef de l'entreprise, le directeur marketing...)
Contexte : J'interviens à un moment où le patron fait des remarques sur l'objet
And you haven't seen everything yet!
My team and I have worked hard to make our burger holder
(je veux dire porte-(ham)burger) as environmentally friendly as possible. Burger King is concerned about environmental issues. Therefore, they will be made from the waste found in our restaurants' garbage bins. A new waste bin will be installed in our various restaurants to be able to sort your waste between food and plastic. If our customers play the game and accept to sort their waste in exchange for a reduction, we will find less and less plastic in the sea. We have worked on the different components of this object so that they are reusable and washable in the washing machine or by hand. Obviously, if they were not, the interest of our object would be greatly reduced. This one is made of 80% recycled plastic and 20% wood. The wood will come from the various dumps of our partner cities. Moreover, our waiters will be able to put the burger directly on it. This will allow us to avoid putting plastic packaging around the burgers and will also save us money! In addition, with my colleague Brice, we have made sure that the paper leaflets to promote our object will be 100% made of recycled paper. The factories manufacturing these burger holders should work thanks to the heat provoked by our unsold food that we will burn.
Patron (pas ma partie) : Vous avez perdu la tête ! Ces mesures écologiques sont bien trop onéreuses ! Nous ne sommes pas une ONG !
Our customers are the generation of tomorrow, they are willing to pay more to preserve nature.
If we continue to throw our plastic packaging into nature and the sea, many animal species will disappear. The planet is getting warmer by the day and we must avoid this at all costs! Bosses have only one word in mind, the money !
Je vous remercie par avance,
Skabetix
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