Bonjour, je dois faire une tâche finale en anglais ou je dois créer une histoire avec un super héro.
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrai corriger mes fautes d'anglais, pour la forme de la phrase par exemple.
My name is Abby Adana, i'm seventeen years old, i have red hair, blue eyes and white skin. I live in Boston and i study at the Newman School, A car accident takes my parent, James and Nathalie Adana to heaven when i was about 5 months I live with my grand mother. Susan is her name, i do love her, she's always smiling, she's always here for listen to me, she is a small lady, she makes young for her age.
She thinks i'm pretty with my red hair like fire, blues eyes like ocean and my white skin like snow.
But i do not agree with her. Anyway, My life changed on the saturday september the twenty two, i was so excited because my grandmother buy me a ticket for Coldplay's concert.
I remember i had a great time before this terrifying storm arrived and ruin the concert. every body ran away and crying then i get stuck by a lightening. It was so strange i didn't feel anything exept for scared and tired i asked myself because i should go to the hospital but , all that i wanted to do is to leave from here and sleep. Then i get back to my home i go to bed
And then i was dreaming,i was alone, scared , cold in a place where there were no life, there were a tree died, no vegetation, blacks clouds everything was dry and dark . I know that i have to bring this place to live. So i raise my hands up and give water for making a river, wind for move the blacks clouds, fire for warm this cold place and i saw the tree get up from earth.
This is how my life start to change. Now i'm still Abby Adana but i've super powers, i can do a lot of things, like fly, throw fireballs, i can breath under water, i can make a tornado,
And then i get this super powers i feel strong and brave
Merciiiii