Bonsoir! Je suis pas très bonne en Anglais j'ai fais un texte sur Henry VIII. J'aimerai bien savoir si il y a des fautes et pouvoir les corrigés.
Henry VIII was born in 1491, he was the king of The United Kingdom and Ireland. He had 6 wifes and 3 children. His first woman was called Catherine Ofaragon she was Spanish she was born in 1485 and died in 1536. They had a daughter Mary Tudor. In 20 years of marriage they divorced. His second wife was Anne Boleyn. She was born in 1502. They had a daughter Elizabeth I. Accused of adultery and treason. She died beheaded in 1536. His third wife was Jane Seymour. She was born in 1509. She died in 1537 in childbirth d'Edward VI. Anne Of Cleves his fourth wife was born in 1515 and died in 1557. Catherine Howard was his fifth wife was born in 1521. Also accused of adultery and treason she died beheaded in 1512. Again and again he remaried with Catherine Parr a young girl who was born in 1512. They had 20 years apart. Henry VIII died in 1547, and Catherine died one year after him in 1548.
Je pense avoir fais des fautes pour la formulation des phrases. Et surtout pour le mot " en accouchant d'Edward " Je ne sais pas si ça s'écrit comme ça et je ne pense pas. Merciii
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Azmodu93
Je pense pas qu'il est eu Que 3 enfants Je pense qu'il en ait eu 4 plutot apres c'est toi qui voit Sinn sava :)
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Azmodu93
Et au faite, Tu as ecrit She died in 1537 in Childbirth d'Edward VI
Azmodu93
SA ve dire "Elle est née en 1509. Elle est morte en 1537 à l'accouchement d'Edouard VI." Je sais pas si c'est ce que tu voulais dire.
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Je pense qu'il en ait eu 4 plutot apres c'est toi qui voit Sinn sava :)