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Bonjour, je prépare un exposé en anglais, et je voulais savoir si mes phrases sont correctes. Quelqu'un pourrai corriger mes fautes? Merciiii

At the beginning of the movie. We see Jaguar paw, Blunted and other hunter of his tribe, hunting a wild boar. And the moment where the boar die and they have to share it, Jaguar paw gives the animal's testicles to Blunted for laughing at him, because this one can't have children.
We understand that at the beginning, everything is ok. Jaguar paw and his tribe live in the middle of a jungle where pease is spreading.
But, the next day in the morning, his tribe have been attacted. J.P hide his wife and his son for save their life. But he comes back to his tribe for help, him and his tribe have been captured leaving the kids all alone. His tribe is bringing to a city where wives are sold as slave and men are sacrificed.
Maya gives human blood to feed to gods.
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