Bonjour, je prépare un exposé en anglais, et je voulais savoir si mes phrases sont correctes. Quelqu'un pourrai corriger mes fautes? Merciiii
At the beginning of the movie. We see Jaguar paw, Blunted and other hunter of his tribe, hunting a wild boar. And the moment where the boar die and they have to share it, Jaguar paw gives the animal's testicles to Blunted for laughing at him, because this one can't have children. We understand that at the beginning, everything is ok. Jaguar paw and his tribe live in the middle of a jungle where pease is spreading. But, the next day in the morning, his tribe have been attacted. J.P hide his wife and his son for save their life. But he comes back to his tribe for help, him and his tribe have been captured leaving the kids all alone. His tribe is bringing to a city where wives are sold as slave and men are sacrificed. Maya gives human blood to feed to gods.
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Clowyy
Tu pe dire at the beginning we see tree hunters jaw blunted and a third member of the tribe hunting a boar
Clowyy
Et because he wasn't able or couldn't have children. We can see that at the beginning everything is alright jaguar paw and his tribe lives inthecenter or middle of the jungle where peace is spreading but the next morning j.p realises tht his tribe had been attacked and he tries to hide his wife and his child to save their life. But then he comes back to his tribe to call for helpand gets captured with his tribe living the kids all alone. The tribe and JP is taken to.
Clowyy
a city where wifes are sold as slaves and men sacrificed. Maya feeds the Gods with human blood
dorine69
Omg, oui j'ai fais beaucoup de fautes, enfin mes phrases étaient mal dites. Merci beaucouuuup
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