Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous me corriger mon travail s'il vous plait? Le travail étant que je me mette dans la peau d'un détective et que je donne "an oral report" à la police pour savoir qui est le meurtrier. Voici mon "oral report" :
Lord Hewston and his wife had the breakfast at the time of the gunshot whereas Jarvis, the butler, was in the kitchen and finished the service of the breakfast. Lord Hewston has a weapon which puts in the drawer of its office. However every evening the key of this drawer is in its pocket. But I saw in the scene of the crime that the key inserted in the lock of the upper drawer of the office.
Moreover, when the butler had posed the breakfast, its Master asked him to make up a fire. And I could see that fire was well lit. Thus the butler with who been able to make do it fire, shoot on the victim and immediately run in the kitchen in order to finish the service of the breakfast.
When Lord Hewston rushed upstairs, the butler has follows it and made pretence not have heard anything.So, I think that the murderer is Jarvis.

Merci d'avance à ceux qui m'aideront !