Alors en lisant tes réponses, j'ai quand meme voulu corriger certaines erreurs ainsi que rajouter/modifier certaines mots par souci de clarté et de syntaxe.
What are you going to do ?
I am going to travel in an English-speaking country to visit and improve my English skills
Where ?
I am going to the United States of America ( conseils : évitez les abréviations pour démontrer un niveau de langue plus aisé et soutenu )
When ?
I am planning to go to in the United States in January for 12 months ( 1 year )
Experience :
What ? Description ?
I will attend the Cheyenne Frontier Days which is a show a rodeo organized each year since 1897 in the 19th century. ( n'oublie pas le sujet "je" = I avant le verbe )
Transport - means/ costs ?
My mean of transport is a car. It costs around 14.65 $ to 23,67 $ ( par jour ? par semaine ? par mois ? )
Accommodation - type/ cost ?
I will stay in hotel which cost 56.36$ par night.
.....( suite )
Experience 2 :
I will see the Redwood national park in California. I am eager to see the huge and breath-taking trees of this park or even enjoy Sequoia National Park's amazing largest trees on the planet and its imposing granite peaks.
Transport - means/ costs ?
I will need a bus and it costs from 39.43$ to 56.33$
Accommodation - type/ cost ?
I will stay in a hotel which costs 70.97$
Cultural considerations :
The locals are nice although some places may be suspicious.
Things to pack :
What ?
- passeport, authorization ESTA, pictures
- health books, travelling guides, toilet repair kits
- personal drugs, a camera
Why ? ( comme la phrase contient des erreurs de syntaxe )
I need to travel with passport and an ETSA as the former is a document allows me entry into many countries including the United States of America and the latter enables me to travel to one of its 50 states without any visa.
Costs ?
The ETSA authorization costs 14$
The passeport costs 96.94 $
Contraints ?
Unfortunately, the approval of the visa was very tardy. In addition, I had problems with transports and had problems to find accommodations.
J'espère avoir été utile
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Thamirah17
Là oú je n'ai pas répondu.. expérience 1 et 2 à la fin.. et prerequistes... Additional comments
Thamirah17
tu peux m'aider ici ou poster une autre réponse stp
Thamirah17
aides moi pour tout ce que je n'ai pas pu faire
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Bonjour,
J'espère que vous allez bien :
Alors en lisant tes réponses, j'ai quand meme voulu corriger certaines erreurs ainsi que rajouter/modifier certaines mots par souci de clarté et de syntaxe.
What are you going to do ?
I am going to travel in an English-speaking country to visit and improve my English skills
Where ?
I am going to the United States of America ( conseils : évitez les abréviations pour démontrer un niveau de langue plus aisé et soutenu )
When ?
I am planning to go to in the United States in January for 12 months ( 1 year )
Experience :
What ? Description ?
I will attend the Cheyenne Frontier Days which is a show a rodeo organized each year since 1897 in the 19th century. ( n'oublie pas le sujet "je" = I avant le verbe )
Transport - means/ costs ?
My mean of transport is a car. It costs around 14.65 $ to 23,67 $ ( par jour ? par semaine ? par mois ? )
Accommodation - type/ cost ?
I will stay in hotel which cost 56.36$ par night.
.....( suite )
Experience 2 :
I will see the Redwood national park in California. I am eager to see the huge and breath-taking trees of this park or even enjoy Sequoia National Park's amazing largest trees on the planet and its imposing granite peaks.
Transport - means/ costs ?
I will need a bus and it costs from 39.43$ to 56.33$
Accommodation - type/ cost ?
I will stay in a hotel which costs 70.97$
Cultural considerations :
The locals are nice although some places may be suspicious.
Things to pack :
What ?
- passeport, authorization ESTA, pictures
- health books, travelling guides, toilet repair kits
- personal drugs, a camera
Why ? ( comme la phrase contient des erreurs de syntaxe )
I need to travel with passport and an ETSA as the former is a document allows me entry into many countries including the United States of America and the latter enables me to travel to one of its 50 states without any visa.
Costs ?
The ETSA authorization costs 14$
The passeport costs 96.94 $
Contraints ?
Unfortunately, the approval of the visa was very tardy. In addition, I had problems with transports and had problems to find accommodations.
J'espère avoir été utile