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voici ma synthèse d'anglais dont la notion est "espaces et échanges", est ce que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger les fautes en sachant que j'ai beaucoup de lacunes en anglais...
Merci d'avance
Today I am going to deal with the notion spaces and exchanges. An exchange is a movement or circulation. All type of exchanges : people like immigration, trade, media, communication… While a space is the geographical area defined by borders.
To illustrate this notion I will talk about the different waves in America since the nineteenth century.
This leads me to wonder why did people immigrate to the USA ?
So fist I will reflect on the history and the causes of immigration, then we will talk about the motivations of people to immigrate to the USA. And finally I will tackle the consequences of immigration to the USA.
To begin with the history of immigration, determining the causes. The beginning of immigration began during the sixtennth century after discovery of Christophe Colomb. The european settled on the east coast. Then began the slavery by millions of West Africans were forced to come in USA to work on sugar and cotton plantations. The slavery allowed to make rich countries as France, Spain, Britain. It’s the beginning of immigration. Next, they are different waves of immigration. More exactly third as indicate the document « Waves of immigration to the US » who is an oral comprehension. While the ninetennth century , the Europeans suffer of stravation, beacause of potato failure especially Nothern Europe as Irish. After the death of many people, the Irish begin to immigrate to USA. They will become factory workers and the will be contribute to develop the country. Amercia become « Amercia land », because more and more people immigrate to Amercia because she was seen as « The Promised land ». They are a lot of work, and the people think to have better living conditions with prospects. They believe that they will live Amercian Dream. Most people who immigrate are poor, they want to strat from scratch. But some immigrate por other reasons. To illustrate this idea i would refer to a text taken from « Lations : crossing borderlands ». It’s a grirl Josseline who have 14 years old, and with her brother, they want to go in Los Angeles because their mother is there. So they start a long travel, he is dangerous. But Josseline fall sick during the travel. We can think that Josseline dies before she find her mother. It shows that the people immigrate for other reasons. Than more, it shows that the travel is very long and dangerous. So there is surely a lot of people who died.
One last aspect is that of consequences of immigration. The people think it’s the best solution to immigrate to America. They believe to Amercia is « The promised land », that they find a job, to have a better life. But it’s not a reality, it’s just a dream. The document 1 who is a picture show the reality. The migrants make a job that most amercians would be unwilling to do. Futhermore, they are low-paid, the have hardly enough to live. In the picture the migrants seem tired. The song written by Bruce Springsteen « Amercian land » shows the consequences of immigration. This sing tell the story of a man who immigrated to America. He thinks that he will live in the best of the world and all people culde be free and equal. But he will surely happen the opposite. Then he will find in dire straits. However,The migrants will be used as manworker. And they will permit to build the country as we tell the song « « Tey died builiding the railroads, they died in the fields and factories ». The immigration has been beneficial for the Amercia, the country has been able to develop. She permited that Amercia become the fisrt world power.
To conclude, the immigration to America has been positive and negative consequences. On the one hand, the migrants have been influenced by dream, the ideas. On the other hand, Amercia become rich economically and culturally. We have a lot of testimony who tells that migrants have endured. We can to connect the immigration to America with the immigration who happens in Europe.
voici ma synthèse d'anglais dont la notion est "espaces et échanges", est ce que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger les fautes en sachant que j'ai beaucoup de lacunes en anglais...
Merci d'avance
Today I am going to deal with the notion spaces and exchanges. An exchange is a movement or circulation. All type of exchanges : people like immigration, trade, media, communication… While a space is the geographical area defined by borders.
To illustrate this notion I will talk about the different waves in America since the nineteenth century.
This leads me to wonder why did people immigrate to the USA ?
So fist I will reflect on the history and the causes of immigration, then we will talk about the motivations of people to immigrate to the USA. And finally I will tackle the consequences of immigration to the USA.
To begin with the history of immigration, determining the causes. The beginning of immigration began during the sixtennth century after discovery of Christophe Colomb. The european settled on the east coast. Then began the slavery by millions of West Africans were forced to come in USA to work on sugar and cotton plantations. The slavery allowed to make rich countries as France, Spain, Britain. It’s the beginning of immigration. Next, they are different waves of immigration. More exactly third as indicate the document « Waves of immigration to the US » who is an oral comprehension. While the ninetennth century , the Europeans suffer of stravation, beacause of potato failure especially Nothern Europe as Irish. After the death of many people, the Irish begin to immigrate to USA. They will become factory workers and the will be contribute to develop the country. Amercia become « Amercia land », because more and more people immigrate to Amercia because she was seen as « The Promised land ». They are a lot of work, and the people think to have better living conditions with prospects. They believe that they will live Amercian Dream. Most people who immigrate are poor, they want to strat from scratch. But some immigrate por other reasons. To illustrate this idea i would refer to a text taken from « Lations : crossing borderlands ». It’s a grirl Josseline who have 14 years old, and with her brother, they want to go in Los Angeles because their mother is there. So they start a long travel, he is dangerous. But Josseline fall sick during the travel. We can think that Josseline dies before she find her mother. It shows that the people immigrate for other reasons. Than more, it shows that the travel is very long and dangerous. So there is surely a lot of people who died.
One last aspect is that of consequences of immigration. The people think it’s the best solution to immigrate to America. They believe to Amercia is « The promised land », that they find a job, to have a better life. But it’s not a reality, it’s just a dream. The document 1 who is a picture show the reality. The migrants make a job that most amercians would be unwilling to do. Futhermore, they are low-paid, the have hardly enough to live. In the picture the migrants seem tired. The song written by Bruce Springsteen « Amercian land » shows the consequences of immigration. This sing tell the story of a man who immigrated to America. He thinks that he will live in the best of the world and all people culde be free and equal. But he will surely happen the opposite. Then he will find in dire straits. However,The migrants will be used as manworker. And they will permit to build the country as we tell the song « « Tey died builiding the railroads, they died in the fields and factories ». The immigration has been beneficial for the Amercia, the country has been able to develop. She permited that Amercia become the fisrt world power.
To conclude, the immigration to America has been positive and negative consequences. On the one hand, the migrants have been influenced by dream, the ideas. On the other hand, Amercia become rich economically and culturally. We have a lot of testimony who tells that migrants have endured. We can to connect the immigration to America with the immigration who happens in Europe.