Bonjour,
Voici ma synthèse d'anglais dont la notion est myths and heroes, J'ai pas mal de lacunes en anglais donc si quelqu'un pourrait me corriger mes erreurs.
Merci de votre aide! (Bon courage...)
Today I am going to deal with the notion of myth and heroes. First of all to give a definition of this notion. A myth is an ancient story about gods, heroes and magic. A hero is a person admired for his achievements, noble qualities and great courage or a mythological or legendary figure. To illustrate this notion I will talk about the famous people who marked the story of 20th and 21st century.
I wonder how do star become legends.
So first, i will study the example of heroes that exercise particular influence on people and on history. Then I will try to explain how they have transformed their life and the consequence of their celebrities.
By being famous the celebrities are admired by fans wherever they go. They can influence people. Some of them diffuse their ideas hoping that their fans and the other people will fllow their choice. This is what happend with presidential election in america but also in France. For exemple Chuck Norris who is ans actor known worldwide annouced that it supports Donald Trump. On the contrary, Morgan Freeman who is also very famous of the general public has lent his voice for a presidential compaign spot oh Hilary Clinton. In the oral comprehension « qhe becomes multi-million dollar brand ». We learn Marlyn M. permite to sold many products thanks to compagnies who used her image. She works with compagnies as Coca Cola, Mercedes… Her image permite to sold many products even after is death. The celebrities influence the people, for example with Michael Jackson which we studied in class
Become famous includes advantages but also drawbacks. Some celebrities have transformed their life since they are famous. Many of them with the handle pressure of fame were become dependent on alcohol and drug. It’s the case frome one part of the 27 club studied in class. For exemple Jimi Hendrix died in 1970 because of asphyxiation from vomiting after drug and alcohol use as Amy Winehouse in 2011. They didn’t succed to handle the pressures of fame, so they use alcohol or drug for forget the pressures of fame. But they are other solution as consult psychologist. By becoming famous Michael J. changed his life. In the article of « The Guardian », Michael J. started a normal life in a positive way when he was the Jackson Five’s lead vocalist. But with fame he started being weird. He adoptes a chimpanzee, trying to buy the bones of the elephant man. He had no limit. Until have problems as allegations of chils abuse or financial crises. So when he died as a broken man, with a lot of things that overshadowed his image.
To conclude becoming famous can cange a person, so he must control his attendance and to set limits. I think that the concept of myths ans heroes has an important place in the society. He permite to glorify some people who realize a feat as save a life.
Voici ma synthèse d'anglais dont la notion est myths and heroes, J'ai pas mal de lacunes en anglais donc si quelqu'un pourrait me corriger mes erreurs.
Merci de votre aide! (Bon courage...)
Today I am going to deal with the notion of myth and heroes. First of all to give a definition of this notion. A myth is an ancient story about gods, heroes and magic. A hero is a person admired for his achievements, noble qualities and great courage or a mythological or legendary figure. To illustrate this notion I will talk about the famous people who marked the story of 20th and 21st century.
I wonder how do star become legends.
So first, i will study the example of heroes that exercise particular influence on people and on history. Then I will try to explain how they have transformed their life and the consequence of their celebrities.
By being famous the celebrities are admired by fans wherever they go. They can influence people. Some of them diffuse their ideas hoping that their fans and the other people will fllow their choice. This is what happend with presidential election in america but also in France. For exemple Chuck Norris who is ans actor known worldwide annouced that it supports Donald Trump. On the contrary, Morgan Freeman who is also very famous of the general public has lent his voice for a presidential compaign spot oh Hilary Clinton. In the oral comprehension « qhe becomes multi-million dollar brand ». We learn Marlyn M. permite to sold many products thanks to compagnies who used her image. She works with compagnies as Coca Cola, Mercedes… Her image permite to sold many products even after is death. The celebrities influence the people, for example with Michael Jackson which we studied in class
Become famous includes advantages but also drawbacks. Some celebrities have transformed their life since they are famous. Many of them with the handle pressure of fame were become dependent on alcohol and drug. It’s the case frome one part of the 27 club studied in class. For exemple Jimi Hendrix died in 1970 because of asphyxiation from vomiting after drug and alcohol use as Amy Winehouse in 2011. They didn’t succed to handle the pressures of fame, so they use alcohol or drug for forget the pressures of fame. But they are other solution as consult psychologist. By becoming famous Michael J. changed his life. In the article of « The Guardian », Michael J. started a normal life in a positive way when he was the Jackson Five’s lead vocalist. But with fame he started being weird. He adoptes a chimpanzee, trying to buy the bones of the elephant man. He had no limit. Until have problems as allegations of chils abuse or financial crises. So when he died as a broken man, with a lot of things that overshadowed his image.
To conclude becoming famous can cange a person, so he must control his attendance and to set limits. I think that the concept of myths ans heroes has an important place in the society. He permite to glorify some people who realize a feat as save a life.
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Bonne continuation!
(J'ai peut-être rater quelques fautes, mais dans l'ensemble ton texte est super.)