Bonsoir,
Je suis actuellement en Terminale S, j'ai de très grosses lacunes en anglais, Pour mercredi je dois faire un synthèse sur la notion lieu et forme de pouvoir. Je ne l'ai pas entièrement finit, mais je voulais savoir ce que vous en pensiez, si il y a des choses à rajouter, enlever, ne pas dire, et surtout si quelqu'un pourrait me corriger les fautes?
Merci de votre aide!
La voici : 

Today I am going to deal with the notion of locations and forms of power, which refers to power who is the ability or official capacity to exercise control over a place or people lawfully or by force.

To illustrate the notion , it will talk about the India where to find gender and social inequalities, but these can change.

This leads me to wonder whether if extent the India can become a modern loationss

So fisrt I will reflect on gender inequalites, then I will adress the issue of social inequalites, enf finally i will tackle the idea of social and economic changes.

To begin with gender inequalities, in India they are more boys than girls. The family prefers to give a birth to a baby boy than a baby girl. To have a boy includes more advantages financial than more that India is poor country.

To illustrate this idea it would refer to a text taken from « Another Girl ». Kavita is a wife who has given a birth to a baby girl. But, her husband wants to a « little prince ». So when he discovers that the baby is a girl, he becomes angry, furious. Therefore he wants to get ride of his baby girl. However, he doesn’t want to abandon his baby, and she tries to convince her husband to keep their baby. Kavita husband’s doesn’t want to have a girl because it’s more financially attractive to have boy. It’s necessary to pay a dowry to the gromm’s family.

In addition to this social inequalites in India. She include two facets. On the one hand, India have a very big wealth on manpower, she possess a lot of factories. But the manpower is very cheap, so the wokers are exploited, they win very little money. As consequence they are a lot of slum. For instance, we listened oral comprehension, and the India divised into two parts. The first parts is the India tiger with seven, eight and half percent annual average growth in gross domestic product. It’s huge, in France he is only of one and a half. And the middle class and her number continues to grow. Whereas, the other face is the poverty. Close to 500 millions people survive on less than two dollars a day.

However, the India know social and economic changes. There is an evolution.

(3e partie à finir)

To conclude, he stay the effort to be made, it’s neccessary that all citizens can live as developed country, by going to school, can feed and drink. Even if the India know renewal, one must not forget that she knows a difficult period. I m convinced that the Indian can reduce the number of poor people and I consider that the Indian have more liberty,