Bonjour, Vous pouvez me corriger et me dire ce que vous pensez de ma quatrième de couverture? Murderous shade
That makes one decade that one discovers a mutilated corpse buried close to the marshes in New-Orleans. Each murder is renewed both at the same period at the beginning of spring. One evening Harry seventeen years old, who have just moved to another house with his parents in the delta of the Mississippi, walks his dog when he sees a shade digging a hole, the teenager solidifies, his members tremble although he is hidden by wild shrubs. He believes to recognize his neighbor a dark and alarming man. But it is not that individual because it has an alibi. Harry MacFyer intrepid and journalist in the heart decide to investigate...
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sophietith
Salut, voici mes corrections. Pour la première phrase, je suggère, "It has been a decade since someone discovered a mutilated corpse, buried close to the marshes in New Orleans". (Je ne connais pas le mot, "marshes", et ne vois pas à quoi tu fais référence.) Il n'y a pas besoin de tiret pour "New Orleans". Pour la phrase suivante, je suggère, "Each murder is renewed, at the same period, which is at the beginning of spring". Voici mes changements pour le premier paragraphe. Si cela t'aide, envoie-moi un message à "sophietith", pour me le dire, et je continuerai mes changements, pour la suite de ta quatrième de couverture; sinon, ce n'est pas grave. J'espère que cela t'aidera, tout de même, et bon courage pour la suite.
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