est-ce que quelqu'un peut me corriger mon texte en anglais s'il vous plait ? je dois présenter la météo merci à tous par avance ;)
"today the weather is going to be really mixed. A lot of sun is expected this afternoon on the East part of the region but clouds swirling around in Italy will bring unsettled conditions in the other part with thick clouds and pretty low temperatures" "A worst day is expected on Sunday, a low pressure coming from the Central region will bring the risk of some showers, particularly towards Paris, but drifting its way towards the north part of the country. Therefore, the sun may be round the corner between 2 rainfalls. As for the temperatures, they will drop down until 7 degrees." "on monday, the rain will still be affecting the region and as it will meet the cold spell coming from Netherlands, it would be ready for a cold breeze eastwards from Paris" "Good news! on thuesday the sun will finally make his appearance. the region may be dry with mild temperatures thanks to a warm air from Morocco, but 2 or 3 showers are expected in and around" The rain will be back on wednesday. On top of that, fairly gusty winds coming from the East will move the clouds in the direction of Annecy, but should quickly disappear"
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"Today the weather is going to be really mixed. A lot of sun is expected this afternoon on the East part of the region but clouds swirling around in Italy will bring unsettled conditions in the other part with thick clouds and pretty low temperatures" "A worst day is expected on Sunday, a low pressure coming from the Central region will bring the risk of some showers, particularly towards Paris, but drifting its way towards the north part of the country. Therefore, the sun may be round the corner between 2 rainfalls. As for the temperatures, they will drop down until 7 degrees." "On monday, the rain will still be affecting the region and as it will meet the cold spell coming from Netherlands, it would be ready for a cold breeze eastwards from Paris" "Good news! on Thuesday the sun will finally make its appearance. The region may be dry with mild temperatures thanks to a warm air from Morocco, but 2 or 3 showers are expected in and around" The rain will be back on Wednesday. On top of that, fairly gusty winds coming from the East will move the clouds in the direction of Annecy, but they should quickly disappear".
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"A worst day is expected on Sunday, a low pressure coming from the Central region will bring the risk of some showers, particularly towards Paris, but drifting its way towards the north part of the country. Therefore, the sun may be round the corner between 2 rainfalls. As for the temperatures, they will drop down until 7 degrees."
"On monday, the rain will still be affecting the region and as it will meet the cold spell coming from Netherlands, it would be ready for a cold breeze eastwards from Paris"
"Good news! on Thuesday the sun will finally make its appearance. The region may be dry with mild temperatures thanks to a warm air from Morocco, but 2 or 3 showers are expected in and around"
The rain will be back on Wednesday. On top of that, fairly gusty winds coming from the East will move the clouds in the direction of Annecy, but they should quickly disappear".