Bonjour à tous, J'aurai besoin d'aide en anglais svp pour corriger les fautes de ma rédaction ou modifier les tournures de phrases douteuses : It's only been 2 days since I was on board but I already feel very far from the general throng of Queenstown, my hometown in Ireland. Since childhood, Mother has accustomed me to always give the best of myself in all that I undertake. Today mom is no longer with us. That's why I want to make it proud by trying my luck in the United States. My dream is to become a costume designer for the most important New York theater that recruits workforce. For months, I follow the small jobs to save pennies per pennies to pay me this ticket. But, the game was worth the candle, Honestly the steerage class is not great luxury, I am in a dormitory without windows where I feel all the jerks of the boat and frankly it is not very pleasant especially at night (I barely slept). Furthemore, there are 2 Libyan sisters, a Chinese woman and an elderly woman. I dreamed innocently that my lucky star could help me to fulfill my dreams and above all to overcome the death of Mother who was in my eyes stronger than the Titanic. It is currently 10:30 pm and I can not sleep, the room is wet, my limbs are frozen, my teeth slam. Tomorrow I have to get up early because there are only 2 baths for our class. However, it is only insignificant details. I like the friendly atmosphere especially during meals. Indeed, we all eat together, which allows me to create social links. I'm lucky cause I met people who are financially poor but rich in heart and experience. Merci par avance ! C'est noté
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Bonjour à tous, Je suis Première ES et j'aurais besoin d'aide en anglais svp si quelqu'un pouvait corriger les quelques fautes de mon paragraphe à propos du film Casablanca. C'est noté et pour demain ! Merci par avance :) MS : Okay, Yvonne and Ugarte The reason that I have gathered you here today it's for you to give me information about Rick ! U : Why do you want informations about Rick? MS : I'm asking the questions here! Just reply. Especially since ugarte you are friends with Rick !? U: Me ... friend with Rick, my word! Rick has no friends. This man is cynical, bitter and very secret! For 1 year, he runs the Cafe Americain, where I met him. I know Rick is tough on business, stubborn and manages his night club with a master's hand. The latter attracts a diverse clientele: French and Nazi officials, refugees, pickpockets, traffickers. Nevertheless, I trust in this man because he despises me. MS : What do you know about his past? U ; One day I heard a telephone conversation in which he mentioned his past in Paris and the fact that he did not want this city to be occupied by Nazis, he was also opposed to the fascists in Ethiopia and Spain. MS : And you Yvonne? You seem to know Rick! Y : If only this man would give me some of his life-precious time ... Between him and me it's complicated ... I love him and I could have done everything for him but he is so mysterious with me, he does no plan, he never think s of anyone or anything but himself. and his business. He does not care about the happiness of others, mine in particular. Last night he even stood me up. What else can I say? That it is an egoist, solitary and above all a macho full of himself who collects feminine conquests, I could have done anything for him even illegal things. He was never honest with me, beware of this man as the black plague! MS : Do you think that he is involved in the assassination of the two German emissaries? Y ;Probably ! (No hesitation!)
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