Bonjour , est ce que quelqu’un pourrait lire mon article de journal et me dire si il y’a des fautes Hello everyone and welcome to the Sunday newspaper, today one of our correspondents is in Dunkirk, and has sent us a report of the situation: ‘’ The situation is very bad. the Wehrmacht surrounds Dunkirk. There are a few soldiers who are trying to defend the city from the German attack while waiting for civilian boats to arrive to evacuate groups of soldiers. About 100 littleships have arrived in Dunkirk since May 27. The soldiers who are still there try to survive even if it is very complicated to eat and sleep. There is nothing more to eat, so the soldiers criss-cross the city and infiltrate the houses and recover the little food that remains, but by doing this several soldiers were surprised by the Germans and therefore killed . But there are other soldiers who can no longer bear the bombing of the German army and who commit suicide, throwing themselves at the mother. Some soldiers take advantage of the death of some to take possession of the water they had or even his clothes. However the British and French army try to defend their troops, retaliate with the RAF, the Royal Air Force: the British Spitfires are very effective against the German fighters, the famous Messerschmitt. And the French are trying to defend the city during the evacuation ‘’   As you may have read, the situation is very complicated , and the death toll must be very high however the UK is defending its troops and trying to save as many people as possible. Merci d’avance
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Bonjour j’aurais besoin d’aide le plus vite possible . Est ce que quelqu’un pourrait faire la traduction de ce texte svp car je ne suis pas trés fort en anglais et il faut que je rende ce travail pour demain Bonjour à tous et bienvenus au journal du dimanche , aujourd’hui un de nos correspondant est à Dunkerque, et nous a envoyé un rapport de la situation : ‘’ la situation est critique , le Wehrmacht encercle désormais Dunkerque . Il y a quelques soldats qui essaient de défendre la ville contre l’attaque des allemands le temps que ces bateaux de civils arrivent pour évacuer les différents groupes de militaires ,environ 100 littleships sont arrivés depuis le 27 mai à Dunkerque . Les soldats qui sont toujours là , tentent de survivre tant bien que mal . Il n’y a plus de quoi se nourrir , alors les soldats sillonnent la ville afin de pouvoir s’infiltrer dans les maisons et récupérer le peu de nourriture qu’il en reste , mais en faisant ceci plusieurs soldats on été surpris par les allemands et donc tués . Mais il y’a d’autres militaires qui ne supportent plus ces bombardement continus de l’armée allemande et qui se suicident , en se jetant à la mère . Quelques soldats profitent de la mort de certains pour s’approprier de l’eau qu’ils avaient ou encore de ses vêtements . Cependant l’armée britannique et française tentent de défendre leurs troupes, ripostent avec la RAF, la Royal Air Force : les Spitfires britanniques se montrent très efficaces face aux chasseurs allemands, les fameux Messerschmitt. Et les français tentent de défendre la ville le temps de l’évacuation ‘’ Comme vous avez pu le lire , la situation est drastique , et le nombre de morts doit être trés élevé cependant le royaume uni défend ses troupes et essaie de sauver le plus d’hommes possibles . Merci d’avance , je pourrais répondre à vos questions en échange
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Bonjour , J'ai un devoir a rendre dans quelques dizaines de minutes ou il faut que je fasse une critique du film dunkirk , est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait me dire s'il ya des fautes que ce qoit de syntaxe, dans l'organisation du texte ou encore de grammaire merci d'avance Dunkirk Dunkirk is a 2017 war film written , produced and directed by Cristopher Nolan that depicts the Dunkirk evacuation of World War II . Rewarded with three Oscars in 2018, it is the greatest worldwide success, in terms of revenue, for a film dealing with the Second World War . The movie is for all type of audiences , there are war scenes but there is no blood or violent scenes . The movie is based on the evacuation of the English army in Dunkirk . The movie switch between the sea , the air and the land but he switch also in the time because the scenes in the air happened near the end of the battle for only 1 hour , wile the scenes in the land occur while 1 week , and the scenes in the sea occur while 1 day . For me , Dunkirk is a first-rate movie , not because they tell us something that we already know but rather because the film is very realistic , and this allows us to put ourselves in the place of the soldiers . There are several things that make this film realistic and fascinating : The costumes are very well made , we can see that the soldiers in the land have all the material war ( arms , boots , ammunition ) . The pilots are also equipped with all aviation equipment (glasses , leather jackets , helmets with headsets … ) . In the sergeants costumes we can see the badges , and all the little details . We have the impression that they are costumes of the 2nd world war , and it’s sure that they contribute to the overall tone . The decor are also very important in the movie , in the land , the fact that the scenes are really filmed in the beach of Dunkirk , that there is a real WWII ships and a lot of soldiers in the beach waiting the boats , makes the story more realistic so that we are in the place of the soldiers and live with them the Dynamo operation . The special effects are also well done as we confuse with the real scenes , for example when the English airplane falls in the sea , it’s hard to know if these are special effects or not , and for me , they add from experience . Although I enjoyed it ‘s the cinematography , because the techniques used to film the movie are really interesting . The scenes made with drones allow us to see the extent of the battle because we can see all the soldiers aligned in the beach waiting the boats . The switching between different scenes is very well done and keep the ton of the last scene . The fact that the horizon is never horizontal even in the beach show us that nothing is controlled , the small details like this makes the story even more complete without errors . More we don’t need a dialogue because the music transmit us the feelings of the personages and create a worry , suspense …. The music was only incorporated in the movie when it was useful , when it was not useful we could hear the sounds of the boats, the sea , the planes , the birds … This second World War movie is a first-rate movie except in one point ; there are only English soldiers and some french while in the battle of Dunkirk there were a lot of Indian , Moroccan , Senegalese soldiers , but it’s only a small detail and the movie stay legendary . I recommend this movie to everyone because is one of the best movies that I have see in my life and is so interesting see the evacuation of Dunkirk with different point of view ,in the sea , the land and in the air with the airplanes . Finally is a movie who tell us the War but also who makes us live the War
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