S'il vous plait j'ai un dialogue en anglais et j'ai besoin d'une correction d'orthographe et tout. Stephen : Mum , dad , I want to tell you something. It's important. Ayse (M): Hum Louisa (F ) : Yes , tell us. We all ears Stephen : So... I'm leaing to the United-states and I want you to come with me Louisa (F )+ Ayse (M) : What !!! Stephen : I have a project there. I want to fulfill my dream and I need your presence. It means a lot to me . Louisa (F )+ Ayse (M) : Are you kidding ? Stephen : NOO , I'm serious. I read in books and newspaper that a lot of people get fortune thanks to the gold rush. Ayse (M): Oh dear , dont trust everything you read in books. Most of them is not real. Louisa (F ) : Your mum is right. Books don't always reflect the reality. Stephen : And who do you know ? Did you even try ?Let's do it . I'm one hundred per cent sur that we will be rich and we will have a better life. Louisa (F ) : Sun , it's not so simple. Do you know all the obstacles that we will have to face there ? And do you know how difficult it is to live in an other country ? You must get used to their culture , you know ? Ayse (M): And did you even once thought about your sister ? She wants to stay here. Andd , and you friends. They are going to miss you so much. You are so popular , you absence will not going to be unnoticed Stephen : But mum , dud , it's United states. The country of freedom. They are open minded unlike here. We will never feel that we are stranger. In adds , I learned English. Louisa (F ) : Everybody has a dream : Some people will achieve them beacause they are very lucky and authers not because they aren't. Stephen : And I'm part of the lucky one. Please come one. The landscapes are beautifull , wonderfull.I still see the photos of the skyscrapers. I'm sure if you see it you will change your mind. Ayse (M): Whey you don't like Germany?Our country also has beautifull landscapes. Stephen : Mum , I just see stones, trees and houses. Do you know what ! I will go alone. I will fulfill my dreams no matter what , with you or without you. I will not anyone breaks my dreams. I'm not a daydreamer.
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Ligne 4 : I'm leaving to the United States ligne 9: No I'm serious. I've read in books and newpapers... ligne 11: Most of them are not real. ligne 12: reflect reality. ligne 13: And how do you know? Have you even tried? I really do believe that we'll be rich and have a better life. ligne 15: Son ... ligne 18: And what about your sister? She wants to stay her. And your friends? ligne 21: But mum, dad, it's the United States...... We won't feel like strangers. Besides, I've learned English. ligne 23: Some people will achieve them because they're lucky, others just won't ligne 25: Please come on. The landscapes are beautiful. I can still see the pictures of the skyscrapers. ligne 28: Why don't you like Germany? ligne 29: I will go by myself....... with or without you. I won't let anyone smash my dreams.
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ligne 9: No I'm serious. I've read in books and newpapers...
ligne 11: Most of them are not real.
ligne 12: reflect reality.
ligne 13: And how do you know? Have you even tried? I really do believe that we'll be rich and have a better life.
ligne 15: Son ...
ligne 18: And what about your sister? She wants to stay her. And your friends?
ligne 21: But mum, dad, it's the United States...... We won't feel like strangers. Besides, I've learned English.
ligne 23: Some people will achieve them because they're lucky, others just won't
ligne 25: Please come on. The landscapes are beautiful. I can still see the pictures of the skyscrapers.
ligne 28: Why don't you like Germany?
ligne 29: I will go by myself....... with or without you. I won't let anyone smash my dreams.