Queria um texto sobre gender equality em inglês ( mínimo 10 linhas)
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mikaellybrito
I think yes, because it's a way of education and chivalry. Many men use gender equality as an excuse for being stupid, and/whereas many hypocrite women use to get what they want.
hypocrite women [hypocrite - in this case is enough, one understand that it´s a plural, since it´s an adjective specifying what kind/class of women]
=========== An aside note: Well, I detected only a major grammar glitch. You could express yourself fairly well, but your writing might have meant to answer something, opine about something, there was some kind of "prompt". The way you came up with the piece of text, it seemed like it came out of nowhere! not being judgemental here, just pointing out that the reader has to know the beggining of the story, and a teacher would want to know.
Say, something prompted you, could be a question like this: Do you think gender equality education should be in the curriculum? Or something like that.
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hypocrite women [hypocrite - in this case is enough, one understand that it´s a plural, since it´s an adjective specifying what kind/class of women]
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An aside note:
Well, I detected only a major grammar glitch. You could express yourself fairly well, but your writing might have meant to answer something, opine about something, there was some kind of "prompt".
The way you came up with the piece of text, it seemed like it came out of nowhere! not being judgemental here, just pointing out that the reader has to know the beggining of the story, and a teacher would want to know.
Say, something prompted you, could be a question like this: Do you think gender equality education should be in the curriculum?
Or something like that.