Bonjour à tous, 17 POINT à la clé !!
j'ai une traduc francais/anglais à faire mais j'ai certainement beaucoup de fautes je voudrais que vous me corrigiez svp,
Merci de ne pas vous servir de mon texte svp
Francais:
En général, les vacances sont faites pour se reposer, pour passer du temps en famille ou entre amis et pour ne plus penser aux problèmes du quotidiens durant un période définie, qui est d’ailleurs apprécier par tout les élèves.Je vais désormais vous racontez mes vacances en résumant la première puis la deuxième semaine.
Tout d’abord le lundi et le mardi je me suis occuper de mes deux petits frères, puis le mercredi je suis allais au cinéma voir le film « le labyrinthe », en résumé il raconte l’histoire d’adolescents enfermés dans une boîte à ciel ouvert entourée d’un labyrinthe. Et j’ai fini ma première semaine en finissant l’aménagement de ma chambre la samedi et le dimanche. Puis j’ai commencé la seconde semaine en allant mangé puis me balladé avec ma famille au MN, le mardi je suis partie faire du shopping dans différentes boutiques comme par exemple Zara ou encore Pimkie. Le mercredi j’ai joué jouer à la Xbox toute la journée puisque j’ai eue de nouveaux jeux, le jeudi j’ai passée une journée à B pour halloween avec ma famille, et le vendredi j’ai aussi jouer à la Xbox toute la journée. J’ai finalement terminé mes vacances en passant du temps avec mes amis le samedi et en faisant mes devoirs le dimanche.
En conclusion, j’ai trouvé que les vacances sont passés trop vites car je me suis bien amusé. J’ai vraiment hâte que ce soit les vacances de noel pour passer du temps avec ma famille.
Anglais:
In general, the holidays are for relaxing, spending time with family or friends and not think about the problems of daily during a defined period, which is also enjoyed by all the students.
I will now tell you my holiday summarizing both the first and second week.
First Monday and Tuesday I am taking care of my two younger brothers, then on Wednesday I went to the cinema to see the movie "The Labyrinth", in short it tells the story of teenagers locked in a box open sky surrounded by a maze. And I finished my first week ending development of my room on Saturday and Sunday.
Then I started the second week and then ate me up ballad with my family in MN, Tuesday, I went shopping at various shops such as Zara or Pimkie. Wednesday I played play Xbox all day since I got new games, Thursday, I spent a day at B for halloween with my family, and on Friday I also play Xbox all day. I finally finished my holiday by spending time with my friends on Saturday and doing my homework on Sunday.
In conclusion, I found that the holidays are past too vites because I enjoyed myself. I'm really excited that it's the Christmas holiday to spend time with my family.
Merci beaucoup, je le met aussi en pièce jointe pour que cela soit plus clair à corriger et à lire,
Encore merci !!:)
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First Monday and Tuesday , I am taking care of my two younger brothers, then on Wednesday I went to the cinema to see the movie "The Labyrinth", in short it tells the story of teenagers locked in a box open sky surrounded by a maze. And I finished my first week ending development of my room on Saturday and Sunday. Then I started the second week and then I ate and after I went for a work with my family in MN, Tuesday, I went shopping at various shops such as Zara or Pimkie. Wednesday I played at the Xbox all day since I got new games, Thursday, I spent a day at B for halloween with my family, and on Friday I also played Xbox all day. I finally finished my holiday by spending time with my friends on Saturday and doing my homework on Sunday.
In conclusion, I found that the holidays are past too quickly because I enjoyed myself. I'm really excited that it's the Christmas holiday to spend time with my family.
I will now tell you my holiday resuming both the first and second week.
First Monday and Tuesday I took care of my two younger brothers, then on Wednesday I went to the cinema to see the movie "The Labyrinth", in short, it tells the story of teenagers locked in a box open sky surrounded by a maze. And I ended my first week finishing the adjusting of my room on Saturday and Sunday.
Then I started the second week, by dining and hiking with my family in MN. Tuesday, I went shopping at various shops such as Zara or Pimkie. Wednesday I played Xbox all day since I got new games. Thursday, I spent a day at B for Halloween with my family, and on Friday I also play Xbox all day. I finally finished my holiday by spending time with my friends on Saturday and doing my homework on Sunday.
In conclusion, I think that the holidays passed too quickly because I enjoyed myself. I'm really excited for the Christmas holidays to spend time with my family.
Sinon, j'ai l'impression que tu as utilisé le Google traducteur ... N'est-ce pas ?