Bonjour, J'ai un devoir en anglais ( traduction ) et si quelqu'un pourrait m'aider cela serait assez cool. Sachez que j'ai déjà fait une traduction personnelle mais je pense remplis de fautes.
Prérequis: Utiliser 2 formes au futur. Sujet imaginatif. 150 mots minimum. Thème: Reprendre la suite d'une histoire ( cela ne vous apporte rien ).
Merci de ne pas utiliser un Google Translate ^^. Si vous souhaitez que je donne mes phrases traduites par mes "soins" merci de me le demander en demande d'infos.
Voici les phrases en Français:
17 janvier 2015. C'est horrible ! En partant à l'école mon e-pod est tombé dans les escaliers ! Voilà ce qui arrive quand on est pressé... Il était tout neuf pourtant, on me l'avait offert pour les fêtes de Noël. L'écran est tout fissuré et j'essaye de taper dessus mais il ne fonctionne pas... Je ne peux plus écouter ma musique ! Comment vais-je faire ? Mes parents ne le savent pas encore mais j'ai peur de leur réaction. Je vais devoir inventer une excuse... Je serai angoissée !
19 janvier 2015 Super... Je vais devoir attendre longtemps pour pouvoir écouter ma musique. Mon père est d'accord pour m'acheter un nouveau e-pod... mais à Noël prochain ! Nous n'avons plus de Carbon Point. En plus de cela, je vais devoir aider mes parents dans les taches ménagères en échange de Carbon Points. Je vais devoir économiser toute l'année... Je serai une vraie radine ! Les gens riches ont de la chance de pouvoir acheter 50 Carbon Points par mois !
23 janvier 2015 Dans 2 semaines c'est les vacances ! Enfin du repos. Je vais pouvoir aider beaucoup de personnes en échange de Carbon Points ! J'ai déjà récupéré 8 Carbon Points en 4 jours... Soyons optimiste. Quand je marche dans la rue, je vois beaucoup de personnes avec des e-pod... La chance ! Je serai tellement heureuse d'écouter mes chansons préférées. Je pense pouvoir acheter mon nouveau e-pod cet été, restons positif, cela ne fait pas beaucoup de jours...
Voilà, merci de m'aider ^^ ( Mes phrases en anglais sont faites, je vais donc corriger à partir de votre traduction ).
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January 17th, 2015. It is horrible! By leaving at the school my e-pod fell on the stairs! That is what arrives when we are pressed. It was quite new nevertheless, we had offered it to me for Christmas. The screen is quite cracked and I try to knock but it does not work.I can't listen to any more my music! How am I going to make? My parents do not still know it but I am afraid of their reaction. I am going to have to invent an excuse.I shall be worried ! January 19 th, 2015 Super. I will have to wait for a long time to be able to listen to my music. My father agrees to buy me a new one e-pod, but from next Christmas! We have no more Carbon Point. In addition to that, I will have to help my parents in the domestic spots in exchange for Carbon Points. I will have to save up all year long. I shall be the real stingy one! Rich people have of the chance being able to buy 50 Carbon Points a month !
January 23 th 2015 In two weeks it is the holidays ! Finally of the rest. I be going to be able to help many people in exchange for Carbon Points! I have already got back eight Carbon Points in four days. Let us be optimistic. When I walk in the street, I see many people with e-pod . The chance ! I shall be so happy to listen to my favorite songs. I think of be able to buy my new e-pod this summer, let us remain positive, it does not make many days .
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It is horrible! By leaving at the school my e-pod fell on the stairs! That is what arrives when we are pressed. It was quite new nevertheless, we had offered it to me for Christmas. The screen is quite cracked and I try to knock but it does not work.I can't listen to any more my music! How am I going to make? My parents do not still know it but I am afraid of their reaction. I am going to have to invent an excuse.I shall be worried !
January 19 th, 2015
Super. I will have to wait for a long time to be able to listen to my music. My father agrees to buy me a new one e-pod, but from next Christmas! We have no more Carbon Point. In addition to that, I will have to help my parents in the domestic spots in exchange for Carbon Points. I will have to save up all year long. I shall be the real stingy one! Rich people have of the chance being able to buy 50 Carbon Points a month !
January 23 th 2015
In two weeks it is the holidays ! Finally of the rest. I be going to be able to help many people in exchange for Carbon Points! I have already got back eight Carbon Points in four days. Let us be optimistic. When I walk in the street, I see many people with e-pod . The chance ! I shall be so happy to listen to my favorite songs. I think of be able to buy my new e-pod this summer, let us remain positive, it does not make many days .