bonjour ! je voudrais savoir si mon texte a un sens (si des phrases ne sont pas bonnes, veuillez me corriger svp)
"I would like to go at the 5th Avenue because it's the most expensive and best shopping streets in the world (many malls that I love are without a doubt there) and i'm crazy about doing shops (like all the teenage girls). also, I would like to go at The Metropolitan Art Museum because I love art, and it's the biggest museum of art in the world. I really would like to see my favorite band at The Lincoln Center. And the place seems great. I would like to visit Times Square at night, it looks awesome with the billboards, and Times Square is called "The Crossroad of the world" or "The Center of the Universe". It sounds good, right ? After, I would like to go at Central Park, I like walking into parks. That park is the most visited urban park with 778 acres. It's cool. me who like parks, i would be served. And to finish, I would like to go at the Museum of Natural History, there are so many specimens of plants and animals ! it's awesome, isn't it ? "
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