pouvez vous me dire si mon texte est correct/s'il y a des fautes et me corriger etc? merci
(on doit faire un reportage radio sur des naufragers qui ont été retrouvés récemment)

"You're listening to BBC and it's 8 in the morning. Breaking news : a group of 5 castaways was found on an island in the Pacific Ocean on monday. They were discovered by the captain of a famous cruise.
Those 5 friends were on the helicopter of one of them to take a little trip for fun when the engine suddenly stopped, the pilot couldn't control the helicopter anymore, so they all took a parachute and jumped in the sea. Fortunately they were all safe after the jump, and there was an island just beside them. They stayed on the island for 2 months. They had no mean of communication, they were totally desperate.
One of those castaways said that he found interesting escaping from reality for two months. His friends totally disagreed with him : they were scared at the idea of being eaten by a bear or something. But in spite of that they tried to adapt and they succeeded. So, after 2 months they were discovered by the captain of a cruise, the castaways were yelling for help when they saw the ship. That's how they get their normal life back.
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