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One day, my grandmother related me a story about her youth that changed her life and made her become the wonderful, honourable and brave woman she is: when she was a child, she fell in love with a boy at school, who is actually my grandfather. They got married a few years later, when they were 19. The day of their wedding, my grandmother was already pregnant of 3 months. She told me that they were perfectly happy together, but one day my grandfather had to go to his military service so he left. Days went by and Christmas was there. He was still to his military service but he wanted to make a surprise to my grandmother : to come back to spend some special time with her. But unfortunately, he had a car accident on his way back home and died.
My grandmother was utterly devastated, left alone with her only child (who was not even born when her husband died) and became a widow only at the age of 19. She suffered a lot, she has been distraugh and grief-stricken for years, and even now, 50 years after those events, when she related me that story, I felt sadness and nostalgia in her voice, and I really felt her sadness inside of me.
Her story made me realize that you have to spend the more time you can with the ones you love, because something terrible can happen anytime, especially when you don't see that coming. To my mind, her story was like a significant event in my life : it made me think and opened my eyes regarding to the world and life. It also changed my vision on things, and the way I am towards others.
One day, my grandmother related me a story about her youth that changed her life and made her become the wonderful, honourable and brave woman she is: when she was a child, she fell in love with a boy at school, who is actually my grandfather. They got married a few years later, when they were 19. The day of their wedding, my grandmother was already pregnant of 3 months. She told me that they were perfectly happy together, but one day my grandfather had to go to his military service so he left. Days went by and Christmas was there. He was still to his military service but he wanted to make a surprise to my grandmother : to come back to spend some special time with her. But unfortunately, he had a car accident on his way back home and died.
My grandmother was utterly devastated, left alone with her only child (who was not even born when her husband died) and became a widow only at the age of 19. She suffered a lot, she has been distraugh and grief-stricken for years, and even now, 50 years after those events, when she related me that story, I felt sadness and nostalgia in her voice, and I really felt her sadness inside of me.
Her story made me realize that you have to spend the more time you can with the ones you love, because something terrible can happen anytime, especially when you don't see that coming. To my mind, her story was like a significant event in my life : it made me think and opened my eyes regarding to the world and life. It also changed my vision on things, and the way I am towards others.
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Hey !Ton texte est bien rédigé mais il y a quelques erreurs de syntaxe et de grammaire/orthographe que j'ai corrigé, j'ai passé tout cela à un vérificateur orthographique et grammaticale manuel (Moi !) et informatique professionnel ! Voici donc le '' corrigé '' final ;) !
One day, my grandmother related me a story about her youth that changed her life and made her become the wonderful, honourable and brave woman she is: when she was a child, she fell in love with a boy at school, who is actually my grandfather. They got married a few years later, when they were 19. The day of their wedding, my grandmother was already pregnant of 3 months. She told me that they were perfectly happy together, but one day my grandfather had to go to his military service so he left. Days went by and Christmas was there. He was still to his military service but he wanted to make a surprise to my grandmother : to come back to spend some special time with her. But unfortunately, he had a car accident on his way back home and died.My grandmother was utterly devastated, left alone with her only child (who was not even born when her husband died) and became a widow only at the age of 19. She suffered a lot, she has been distraugh and grief-stricken for years, and even now, 50 years after those events, when she related me that story, I felt sadness and nostalgia in her voice, and I really felt her sadness inside of me.Her story made me realize that you have to spend the more time you can with the ones you love, because something terrible can happen anytime, especially when you don't see that coming. To my mind, her story was like a significant event in my life : it made me think and opened my eyes regarding to the world and life. It also changed my vision on things, and the way I am towards others.
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Anna.