Bonjour, Pourriez-vous corriger mon texte d'anglais s'il vous plaît, merci d'avance. Le sujet porte sur Corporals Killings: The 19th march 1988 two British Army Corporals David Howes and Derek Wood were killed by the IRA wich is army irish republican provisional. They were killed in the city Andersonstown in the region Belfast in the Nothern of Ireland. This two soldiers were off-duty and were shot savagely after met the funeral procession of an IRA member. Wich know how IRA has arrived to kill Wood and Howes it must wind 3 days before. The 16th March 1988, paramilitary Michael Stone had attacked an IRA funeral in the Milltown Cemetery making 3 dead and many wounded. And whose one of the 3 dead belonged of IRA. So David and Derek were killed thinking they were in Andersonstown wich remake same of Michael Stone. Wich protect of attack Mister Wood took his arm and shot in the air for remove the crowd. The soldiers were dragged to the nearby Casement Park sports ground. Then they was shot and stripped to their underpants and socks. Finally the two mens were driven less than 200 yards to waste ground near Penny Lane. This incident was filmed by televisions cameras and the images have been described as some of the "most dramatic and harrowing" of the conflict in Nothern Ireland.
This video watch of the crowd weren't afraid to reattack the car after gunshot, they attacked with many objects. The 2 soldiers were removed of the car and were hit and thrown on the groud. A journalist recalled one of the men were dragged past a group of journalists and this soldier didn't cry but he looed at journalists with terrified eyes, as though they were all enemies in a foreign country. Corporals Derek Wood was shot six times and Corporals David Howes was shot fives times.
The 19th march 1988 two British Army Corporals David Howes and Derek Wood were killed by the IRA which is army Irish republican provisional. They were killed in the city Andersons town in the region Belfast in the Northern of Ireland. This two soldiers were off-duty and were shot savagely after met the funeral procession of an IRA member. Which know how IRA has arrived to kill Wood and Howes it must wind 3 days before. The 16th March 1988, paramilitary Michael Stone had attacked an IRA funeral in the Milltown Cemetery making 3 dead and many wounded. And whose one of the 3 dead belonged of IRA. So David and Derek were killed thinking they were in Andersons town which remake same of Michael Stone. Which protect of attack Mister Wood took his arm and shot in the air for remove the crowd. The soldiers were dragged to the nearby Casement Park sports ground. Then they was shot and stripped to their underpants and socks. Finally the two men's were driven less than 200 yards to waste ground near Penny Lane. This incident was filmed by televisions cameras and the images have been described as some of the "most dramatic and harrowing" of the conflict in Nothern Ireland.
This video watch of the crowd weren't afraid to re attack the car after gunshot, they attacked with many objects. The 2 soldiers were removed of the car and were hit and thrown on the ground. A journalist recalled one of the men were dragged past a group of journalists and this soldier didn't cry but he looked at journalists with terrified eyes, as though they were all enemies in a foreign country. Corporals Derek Wood was shot six times and Corporals David Howes was shot five times.
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The 19th march 1988 two British Army Corporals David Howes and Derek Wood were killed by the IRA which is army Irish republican provisional. They were killed in the city Andersons town in the region Belfast in the Northern of Ireland. This two soldiers were off-duty and were shot savagely after met the funeral procession of an IRA member.
Which know how IRA has arrived to kill Wood and Howes it must wind 3 days before.
The 16th March 1988, paramilitary Michael Stone had attacked an IRA funeral in the Milltown Cemetery making 3 dead and many wounded. And whose one of the 3 dead belonged of IRA.
So David and Derek were killed thinking they were in Andersons town which remake same of Michael Stone.
Which protect of attack Mister Wood took his arm and shot in the air for remove the crowd. The soldiers were dragged to the nearby Casement Park sports ground. Then they was shot and stripped to their underpants and socks. Finally the two men's were driven less than 200 yards to waste ground near Penny Lane. This incident was filmed by televisions cameras and the images have been described as some of the "most dramatic and harrowing" of the conflict in Nothern Ireland.
This video watch of the crowd weren't afraid to re attack the car after gunshot, they attacked with many objects. The 2 soldiers were removed of the car and were hit and thrown on the ground.
A journalist recalled one of the men were dragged past a group of journalists and this soldier didn't cry but he looked at journalists with terrified eyes, as though they were all enemies in a foreign country. Corporals Derek Wood was shot six times and Corporals David Howes was shot five times.
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